I just read "The Sentinel Affair" and I wanted to let you know that I thought you did a really nice job with it. Jim 'encountering' Blair at the commune and his attempts at 'hippie speak' from his course work made me grin and when Jim whipped off the wig and the 'threads' I just about squeed my jeans. Truth to tell, at this point your story reminded me a bit more of "Mission Impossible" than MUNCLE but all good. I thought you really exhibited your future promise as a top flight TS authoress in the scenes in the Temple with Blair drugged and interacting with the murals. At this point your story really was gripping and I totally bought the premise insane Kenny, evol Alex, brainwaves, pooled Sentinels et al!
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I just read "The Sentinel Affair" and I wanted to let you know that I thought you did a really nice job with it. Jim 'encountering' Blair at the commune and his attempts at 'hippie speak' from his course work made me grin and when Jim whipped off the wig and the 'threads' I just about squeed my jeans. Truth to tell, at this point your story reminded me a bit more of "Mission Impossible" than MUNCLE but all good. I thought you really exhibited your future promise as a top flight TS authoress in the scenes in the Temple with Blair drugged and interacting with the murals. At this point your story really was gripping and I totally bought the premise insane Kenny, evol Alex, brainwaves, pooled Sentinels et al!
*twirls you*
I am so glad you are still here in TS!