S'OK hon, I was half-assuming, sine you'd already offered, that you'd still be up for it. ::smiles sweetly. bats eyelashes:: My main concerns are - given the nature of the way it's been written, chapter by chapter with sometimes long hiatuses between, that inconsistencies may have crept in, plot glitches, repetition so I'd defo need someone to check for all that. Briticisms, sure, and the usual grammar and whatever.

I'll send you the story so far today then. Thanks again for this, it's HUGELY appreciated.