The book's about a trip I made when I was living there.

(Can I just do a little beta thing and mention that there should be no apostrophe in Cubans, in the last sentence? And if that's terribly rude, I'm so sorry!)
No, not at all! I haven't beta'd any of the new stuff yet, tbh.

I'm glad you like the par. I was pleased I got three dull pars down to a single one that said more or less the same thing.