I smell of dust, old books and bluebells. First Person : comments.
Sun | Mon | Tue | Wed | Thu | Fri | Sat |
---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
1
|
2
|
3
|
4
|
|||
5
|
6
|
7
|
8
|
9
|
10
|
11
|
12
|
13
|
14
|
15
|
16
|
17
|
18 |
19
|
20
|
21
|
22
|
23
|
24
|
25
|
26
|
27
|
28
|
29
|
30
|
31
|
Too cool for subject
Personally, I hate any sort of writing where the style of the writing is the first and last thing that hits me when reading a story (whether it be FF or pro).(I may be being harsh but it kinda strikes me that the person is going look at me, I can do this shiny sort of wrting, I'm a Writer!) Ist person obviously does this straight away, but then that's uncultured me. I actually read a Robin Hobbs a few months back- didn't realise before I bought it 1p is the pov she uses always. Until the story began to wind itself up, I found it a slog but once the story got going, then it was enjoyable enough. There are other styles that bug me more though (over descriptive, use of present tense). If a story is good enough then I'll read it - but it needs more to drag me in and keep me in. And yeah never, ever tried to write in it!