posted by [identity profile] whipsandscums.livejournal.com at 11:03pm on 21/10/2008
I love Child of God, it's one of my favorite stories. It's totally Quality, well written and researched. You should be very proud.
 
posted by [identity profile] gillyp.livejournal.com at 10:27am on 22/10/2008
I'm really pleased you say that because it was a real 'heart and soul' piece of writing that was immensely hard to do but came out well, I thought (if that doesn't sound awful! *g*) and I was pleased with it but it's never been terribly well liked - it's had a paltry amount of fb so...

::iz beaming::

Thank you. :o)
 
posted by [identity profile] whipsandscums.livejournal.com at 11:16pm on 22/10/2008
Ahem, clears throat, well, I can go into a little more detail about why I love it.
I love stories that tell me more about Jim/Blair's past, we get so little of it in cannon. I prefer slash but I occasionally like my slash with a plot, and this has a heck of a plot. This is also one of the few stories that has a convincingly likable Naomi, you've made her human and vulnerable and worthy of sympathy. I love how you have Jim/Blair show affection towards each other in ways other than sex. A lot of the sex in slash feels flat and lack tension to me, I personally don't think you need a heavy sex scene to make a story slashy. The one sex scene they do have comes in the right moment in the story, it's brief but still has plenty of ambiance and heat. You did a great job with Naomi, I thought her voice was spot on. The same with Blair, this was Naomi's story but Blair's journey also and I like how you've dovetailed both their povs. I love the deathbed scene, quiet and not overly dramatic and yet so very painful. And the end, where they are all on the plane, perfect, always makes me teary eyed. But what's awesome is I feel optimistic and uplifted at the same time, I think it's because the resolution was about compassion and forgiveness and I just got the feeling that Blair was going to eventually be ok because he has so much love in his life.
 
posted by [identity profile] gillyp.livejournal.com at 09:59am on 23/10/2008
Gosh.

::giggles::

Golly.

That's just... ::hides blushes:: I have no words. Thank you so much! I'm very glad you enjoyed it that much.

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