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Just comin' up for a breather...

Oh my, I've been busy. And poorly. Haven't been online much, lately and I'm sure there's loads of people I should be replying to and all that - sorry - and there's a fluterbev story waiting to be read!! O:!!

But the real reason I'm here on a Saturday morning, when I really should be cleaning the house, is that I'm looking for a helpful soul, who doesn't mind a bit of angst, to cast a critical eye over a WIP. The story's a Moonridge auction win (so I can't post it here), slash (but only very mild; they're all talk, these boys! heh heh), fairly dark and angsty, and told entirely in 1st person (for now! - One of the things I need advice on). It's currently at just over 9,000 words, and is probably about a third to halfway done. Right now I'm just looking for an opinion on the style, content, angst level (not sure it's high enough yet - hee), etc. I don't need a beta right now (unless anyone's offering...? (o:).

So if there's anyone out there... You know I'll be eternally grateful... (o: Sheesh. I am so insecure I'm surprised my arms stay on.