The Roman WIP...

[panik]

I've re-worked chapter 12, for those of you who didn't think it was really working before - just a little tinkering, with some extra stuff that, I hope, explains Geminius' motivation and Blair's feelings a little more.

It's here, if you want it.

Comments

[chriselora55.livejournal.com]

The extra bit does make a difference Gilly. Enjoying the story. very much.

Awaiting the next part.