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posted by [personal profile] panik at 04:44pm on 12/03/2007 under , ,
Purloined from [personal profile] janedavitt (like the filthy footpad I know I am)...

Go to page 123 (or 23 or 3 if it hasn't got that far yet) of your current WiP. Read down four sentences. Type out the paragraph that follows.

Well I have 2 on the go at the moment, one at 18 pages so far, the other a mere 4 and a half.

From the longer one, I find;

"
I flirted with my son’s partner because it’s what I do. Jim was a little bemused by me, I could see that and I had fun teasing him. I couldn’t resist; he seemed so straight, so whitebread, so entirely wrong as a companion for my Blair. How wrong I was about that – about a lot of things. I had no idea, then, that he would ask about my deepest, darkest secret, or that I would end up confessing it to him. Even now, I don’t really know why I told him, a man I’d only just met. Sometimes you just have to go with your instincts, and Jim seemed so solid, so trustworthy, so safe. "

Hmmmm.

From the shorter one;
"
We both know that’s not true, Chief. Don’t feel you have to be stronger than you are.”

Well that's illuminating! (hee!)

I'm really enjoying both of these. #1 - I already know where that's going to go and it's an interesting concept, with lots of 1st person, but  I'm not anticipating anything unexpected. I'm getting much more fun out of #2, which I only started today - 2,000 words in and it's already surprised me by taking a turn I hadn't planned. And I can't help but feel it's going to be very, very long.

Your turn to play...

location: My sofa
Mood:: 'silly' silly
There are 4 comments on this entry. (Reply.)
 
posted by [identity profile] janedavitt.livejournal.com at 06:26pm on 12/03/2007
These snippets all over my f-list are so tantalising! Can't wait to read them when they're done.
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posted by [identity profile] snailbones.livejournal.com at 10:11pm on 12/03/2007
And I can't help but feel it's going to be very, very long.

That odd noise is just me rubbing my hands together greedily... just ignore it. *g*
 
posted by [identity profile] miwahni.livejournal.com at 12:18pm on 14/03/2007
Your first story sounds great, I love reading fics which include Naomi. Where will you post these when they're done?
 
posted by [identity profile] gillyp.livejournal.com at 01:55pm on 14/03/2007
Well thank you kindly! They're both Moonridge offerings, but as soon as the ones who won 'em let them loose in the world, they'll be on my website: http://www.templeofthesentinels.com/ and 852.

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