ext_16267: (JimandBlairLuna)
posted by [identity profile] slipperieslope.livejournal.com at 08:47pm on 09/09/2008
*tiptoes in*

I just read "The Sentinel Affair" and I wanted to let you know that I thought you did a really nice job with it. Jim 'encountering' Blair at the commune and his attempts at 'hippie speak' from his course work made me grin and when Jim whipped off the wig and the 'threads' I just about squeed my jeans. Truth to tell, at this point your story reminded me a bit more of "Mission Impossible" than MUNCLE but all good. I thought you really exhibited your future promise as a top flight TS authoress in the scenes in the Temple with Blair drugged and interacting with the murals. At this point your story really was gripping and I totally bought the premise insane Kenny, evol Alex, brainwaves, pooled Sentinels et al!

*twirls you*

I am so glad you are still here in TS!
 
posted by [identity profile] gillyp.livejournal.com at 10:20pm on 09/09/2008
My ficly past has been haunting me a bit this week. After that 1st lines meme I went way back and re-read one of my Alias Smith n Jones fics this week - that was a real trip into the dim and cobwebbed distant, I can tell you. (o:

TheS.A - Really? wow. *g* I haven't read that in a long time. It never got any feedback, I was astonished when it made last year's LMFA ballot. Mission Impossible, huih? I can't remember ever watching that either - I mean, I remember it being on but couldn't tell you a thing about it. *g*

I do remember the Moonridge winner throwing me for a major loop asking for that as a theme. It certainly taught me a lesson about offering 'an AU of your choice' in an auction. (o:

I'm extremely glad you enjoyed it anyhow. I should go back and re-read it myself, shouldn't I? I can barely remember anything about it now.

I thought you really exhibited your future promise as a top flight TS authoress in the scenes in the Temple...
Ah... go on with you. ::is secretly pleased::

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