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I just finished my latest fic - the one for mariojoe, the one she won for Moonridge 2006  (yup, it's only taken me a year to write ::hangs head in abject shame::)

OK, so... this story has quite a lot of first person in it, mostly in third, but switching into 1st from time to time, with the entire first chapter in 1st P; three voices. Now I know when you're reading it, that it should be apparent that it's moved into 1st, and who is talking, but should the formatting reflect that, do you think? I'm just experimenting with italics, different fonts, indenting pars - I'm just not sure...

Italics are probably the easiest, most recognisable way to separate out the 1st P sections, but I'm wondering if that's going to be too hard on the eyes when there are thousands of words of this (almost 3,000 continuous words in the first chapter alone)? - I'm wondering whether it's not better to just leave it all the same and let the narrative passages speak for themselves?

Any advice received with gratitude. (o:

I've been trying for a week to register, since they won't accept my email/log-ins from previous years.

I tried my other 3 email addys which it says are 'already registered' (they aren't)

I've created three new Yahoo email accounts and tried to register - it says they're already registered (clearly, they aren't!)

I created an email today which actually got accepted (YAY!); they even went so far as to email me a new password, which it won't accept...

'Sorry, Invalid Login Name or Password'

Does anyone have a clue what's going on here? I'd really like to bid, and I just don't know what to do... )o:

ETA: Alright!!! I just created another new email (my fifth in a week) that it's accepted. YAY... but at the same time, man!

Now all I have to do is dredge up some money from somewhere... Sheesh!