Thanks hon. It was the fact it was set in the past they didn;t like - the 3 pars are the only thing that give that away, easy enough to fix and set it in an ambiguous time-frame. I just found, as I was reading it though, lots of it seemed badly written.

It wasn't, really,I was just having a bad day, I think. I'm going to finish tidying it up this afternoon and get it sent out to some new agents.

Thanks for the tea and sympathy!

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